The Official Writing Challenge
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08/22/13
Loved this! I never tired of reading about our Lord and His magnificence.

God Bless~
08/22/13
This is a lovely piece of writing and the subject never gets old.

Thanks for sharing.
08/23/13
Your paragraph bridging the retelling from Genesis and the one from the gospels gives a seamless transition to this piece.

I found this to be slightly weak on the topic, which was certainly present, but not really central to the story. That's really the only weakness I can find, and it's a very minor one. The entry is very well done.