The Official Writing Challenge
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08/22/13
Beautiful! Loved it.

God bless~
08/24/13
A lot of depth expressed so simply. Well done.
08/24/13
A good and meaningful poem of the start of Eve's life. Thanks!
08/24/13
Very much enjoyed your poem, thank you for sharing it.
08/24/13
I absolutely love this poem. I planned to do something on these lines but am so glad I didn't. It would have looked pitiful at the side of this. Great job.
08/25/13
This is a lovely poetic expression of the way God gives us life and being. Well done!
Beautiful. Simple yet complex. It amazes me how you can tell such a propelling story in so few words.
08/28/13
Lovely and lingering...
08/29/13
Congrats! God bless~
08/29/13
Congratulations on your receiving EC! God bless!
08/29/13
Congratulations, Melanie, on this beautiful entry! God bless!
08/29/13
Simply beautiful, "breathtaking." Congrats.
08/29/13
Congratulations Melanie. I'm not at all surprised to see this lovely poem in EC.
I love this! Congratulations on EC.
08/29/13
Congratulations Melanie on your well deserved win! This simple, yet powerful poem just overflowed with beauty and truth! I loved it!
08/29/13
The title says it all in this lovely and inspiring poem. Glad it got the recognition it deserved. Congratulations.
08/29/13
Congratulations on your 2nd place win. As I said earlier - I love this lovely poem.