The Official Writing Challenge
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08/15/13
Oh, this was a great entry! I loved it. So well written, and had a powerful ending.

Awww, romance and Hawaii, it doesn't get much better than that.

Clever sophisticated romp.


God Bless~
08/15/13
Awe, cute story. Shall I assume Rosie marries William and they honeymoon in Hawaii? Lovely. I may have read it wrong, but Honolulu is located on the island of Oahu, one of the islands in the "Hawaiian Islands" chain. But, maybe you weren't saying it was on the island of Hawaii, which is the largest and not the prettiest of the islands because of all the volcanic ripples everywhere. Of course, the beaches are gorgeous, though, so the happy couple could honeymoon there, too. In any case, I loved your story.
08/16/13
Aw, what a sweet little romance story. And, I too was left envisioning a marriage and an all expense paid honeymoon in Hawaii for Rosemary and William. Enjoyable read.
08/22/13
Congrats on your well deserved fine win! Excellent!
08/22/13
Pam!!! Yes...Congrats!

God bless~
08/22/13
Congratulations Pam for your win on this sweet story of yours!
08/22/13
Congratulations on your double-win! Well-deserved recognition for a totally delightful story!
08/22/13
Congratulations, Pam! This is a well deserved win for a great entry. Loved it.
Congratulations on your win! This story stirs so many emotions. Beautifully structured and written.
08/22/13
AWESOME! Loved the entire piece.:) Julie Andre'
08/23/13
Great story telling. Loved it. Congrats on your placing.
08/24/13
Again, I am so proud of you, Pam. One grand romance here. A woman's story...dutifully done!

Continued blessings on your creativity with words. And a heap of Congratulations on your placement here. Wonderful!
08/24/13
You did an outstanding job hoodwinking me into believing she was actually in paradise until lost the very last lines. Well done and congrats on your win!