The Official Writing Challenge
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Very vivid detail, a bit too vivid for me when describing some of the foods they would be eating...exotic foods I never care to see cooked, let alone taste! But glad the story ended with someone finally giving Aoli the true recipe for fulfillment...caring and honesty. Well written!
Your descriptions were spectacular.

Great message at the end.

God bless~
Congrats! Well deserved...
Congrats! God bless~
Wow you had me with monkey stew, but then when I saw zebra gut, that took the cake! Your details are exquisite, hmm maybe that's not the right word. :) You had me totally engrossed in this suspenseful and thrilling tale (dare I say tail?) Congratulations on your EC! HAPPY DANCE!
I found this powerfully engaging writing, from beginning to end. Congratulations!
Oh Virgil I absolutely adored your story. HUGE grin.
Your masterfully written tale captivated me with its marvelous, unexpected ending.
One of my favorites this week!