The Official Writing Challenge
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08/16/13
Very vivid detail, a bit too vivid for me when describing some of the foods they would be eating...exotic foods I never care to see cooked, let alone taste! But glad the story ended with someone finally giving Aoli the true recipe for fulfillment...caring and honesty. Well written!
08/20/13
Your descriptions were spectacular.

Great message at the end.

God bless~
08/22/13
Congrats! Well deserved...
08/22/13
Congrats! God bless~
Wow you had me with monkey stew, but then when I saw zebra gut, that took the cake! Your details are exquisite, hmm maybe that's not the right word. :) You had me totally engrossed in this suspenseful and thrilling tale (dare I say tail?) Congratulations on your EC! HAPPY DANCE!
I found this powerfully engaging writing, from beginning to end. Congratulations!
08/26/13
Oh Virgil I absolutely adored your story. HUGE grin.
Your masterfully written tale captivated me with its marvelous, unexpected ending.
One of my favorites this week!