The Official Writing Challenge
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08/16/13
What a cute, creative, charming and captivating story! Love how exotic the title makes the place sound!Enjoyed!
Wasn't quite sure if the MC was a bee or an ant. Could have been either I guess. I also wasn't sure who the lion was until the list of characters at the end of the story. Interesting take on exotic--there is an exotic world out there from all kinds of view points!
08/20/13
Interesting piece that held my attention. Thanks.

God bless~
Your title was a real attention-grabber; and then every word that followed was fascinating. Loved this creative and imaginative take on the word.
Congratulations on ranking 30 overall!