The Official Writing Challenge
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08/15/13
What is exotic certainly is a matter of perspective and you show that so well in this delightful, image filled poem. I laughed at the line about the MC preferring to try snail and snake, rather than oatmeal or peas…so like the thinking a little boy might have! Perfect title because I could just picture the little boy sitting there day-dreaming as I read this. Well done!
I liked the use of the repeating phrase. Also liked the ending line, "And so we dream on--as strangers, as brothers. Good job!
08/20/13
Awww. I really enjoyed this.

God bless~
There is so much real joy and playfulness in this, as well as its message. A pleasure to read. Enjoyed every word.
Congratulations on ranking 20 overall!