The Official Writing Challenge
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08/18/13
This was an excellent story, would be wonderful published as a Children’s book! Excellent message and a delightful read.
Delightful! Wonderful descriptions. Of all that is written here, and many favorite lines there be, I love this line the most:

(This is somewhat of a true story with a lot of liberties taken and instances embellished)


Excellent!
08/20/13
Great job! I loved this. It was a sheer delight to read, and it made me smile from ear to ear!

You need to publish this as a children's story, it could be a series.

God bless~
08/21/13
I love it! As already stated this could easily be a children's book with a few chapters added.

It is easy to read, funny and touching all at the same time.

Thanks.
This is just the best. A personal favorite! Thanks!! A definite children's story in the making!!