The Official Writing Challenge
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11/16/05
This is a different take! I wish I could read more of the story :) Great way to show their personalities.Thanks!
Emotional stuff! You kept my attention all the way to the (surprise) ending. Yes, I'd like to know more, too!
11/18/05
Quite a different story but very enjoyable. The ending gave the story a nice edge.