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08/20/13
There is a lot of truth to this story. All of the "exotic resorts" are an Oasis in and of itself, but once outside the resort, it is the polar opposite of the luxury hotel.

Good message.

God bless~
08/21/13
Yes, ads only show the good points of a place. Good story. Thank you.
08/22/13
Your entry is interesting and informative. Thanks.
08/22/13
You painted brought an all too true scenario to life, on the outskirts of all the glitz, in so many places, people live in absolute need and poverty. Such a worthy message to bring to light in your well done story.
08/22/13
Sorry, guess my typing and my thoughts were out of sync...it was supposed to say "You painted a powerful picture and brought and all too true scenario..."
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