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I enjoyed this. I could feel the pain of the MC. You can try to run from your problems, but they often follow. Thankfully, so does Jesus. Nice job.
Your title is poignant, as is this somber story. I was captivated - totally. Your MC could have been me forty years ago . . .
08/09/13
This was a captivating read. It is a little somber for you but packs a wallop of a message. The pain of divorce, especially with a child, can be devastating. This is excellent writing.
08/09/13
It is excellent writing indeed, well done. Thank you.
08/10/13
This is indeed a sombre tale but also captivating from the first paragraph to the last. My reading became faster as I was hoping for a happy ending and I wasn't disappointed. I couldn't help but giggle at sister Bucketmouth with the thrill of dying keeping her alive and her acid breathed warnings. I've known people just like her. All in all this is a well written story with all the right ingredients and an original take on the topic.
08/10/13
Excellent true to life writing. This was a look into "many people" who have faced the same issues and questions that loomed large, form divorce, and or a great loss.

Just a really good piece of writing.

God bless~
08/15/13
Excellent story! Some dreams expired but faith renewed. Sometimes we have to travel a really rough road to get to a happier place. Enjoyed the read!
Congratulations for ranking 18 overall! HAPPY DANCE!!