The Official Writing Challenge
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08/10/13
Awww. This story touched my heart. I loved animals, and love horses so much. What a beautiful ending. Thank you.

God bless~
08/10/13
Awww. This story touched my heart. I love animals, and love horses so much. What a beautiful ending. Thank you.

God bless~
08/11/13
Heart-warming material that's put so credibly together. Great writing.
08/12/13
Oh, such a touching and beautiful story! I love animals and it angers me when they are so mistreated. I am so happy this one had a happy ending!
08/12/13
Oh, this is just heart warming. Loved every single word of it. What a fantastic ending. No Expiry Date sounds like a horse I would love to meet! Great writing.
Oh I loved this bittersweet story. I don't understand why some people think taking care of another living creature is easy. It's an awesome responsibility whether a baby, a hamster, or a horse.

I smiled at the word nauseated because I've been on a mission to help people understand the difference between nauseated and nauseous, and you got it right. Okay, though, should be spelled out or both letters capitalized, OK.

You did a splendid job of bringing this story to life. I'd love to read a whole book about Angie and her horse. It was a delightful read.
08/15/13
Congrats! God bless~
08/15/13
Loved your story:) And I love the horses name! Congratulations!! <3
08/15/13
Congratulations Shirley on your EC win for this touching story!
Precious and heart warming.
Thank you for beauty.
Congratulations! God bless you.
KJV Heb 10:26-31
KJV Rev 14:12
08/20/13
Oh my word...I just finished writing Leola that her entry gave me goose bumps and was my favorite but I think I spoke too soon. Way to wrap up your poignant story.