The Official Writing Challenge
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08/10/13
You have a wonderful story here!
Creative. And this is an all too familiar situation to us today, with so many young women giving up their children. This has potential to be stupendous, with more of the feelings being shown. You told us how she felt "like garbage" and so forth. Dig a little deeper for describing feelings. Put us inside her heart. I can see you already have what it takes! Can't wait to read your next piece!
08/10/13
Powerful! This held a note of authenticity, and there will be some that this message will hit in a deep way.

Nicely done. Thank you.

God bless~
I am stunned that this didn't get EC. This turned my heart inside out for all three involved. I want to hear more about them - please?