The Official Writing Challenge
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08/09/13
Fun to read, and deadly serious. A delightful twist to a dramatic parable . . .
08/09/13
Very Good! And most original work.
08/09/13
Undeniably a very clever and unique take on both the topic and the parable in Luke 12: 16-20! Seems an amusing and lighthearted read until the sobering end hits you. I think every time I hear the "Old MacDonald" song from now on, I will think of this poem! Excellent job on this!!!
08/10/13
Brilliant poem. What an amazing way to adapt the song. As a begginer entrant, I now understand why there is a masters class afterall!
08/10/13
This was very different. And made me smile.

God bless~
08/12/13
This tickled me pink! It has a serious message and an hilarious presentation. (I'm still laughing.) And it was certainly unique. What more could I say?
08/13/13
This is wonderful. I love the sardonic sense of humor and the powerful message at the end.
08/14/13
Wonderful, inventive, and very thought-provoking. Just great!
08/14/13
Oh what a marvelous way to illustrate this lesson! Well done.
08/16/13
Congratulations for ranking 27 overall!
08/27/13
Much food for thought - right through to the climax. Clever parallels to Jesus' parable (a parallelable???)