The Official Writing Challenge
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08/09/13
Good job with the rhyme and rhythm of this enjoyable poem. I was impressed with the fact that every line ended with same sounding words.
08/09/13
Very good! This was a joy to read and left a big smile on my face! Thanks for sharing!
Delightful, your gift to inspire. Stirring our souls to rise from the mire. Thank you for taking this tired soul higher . . .
08/09/13
Brilliant. How you came up with all of those rhymes is beyond me. Great message too!
Wow!
Oh how I aspire,
It's my desire,
To reach thy lofty heights.
08/10/13
Beautiful, and so uplifting!
Thanks. God Bless~
08/10/13
Great poem, well done.
08/12/13
Powerful in form, language, beauty and message! Great job!!
08/12/13
I love your rhyme, my poems are dire; believe me 'cos I am no liar. I want full marks for being a tryer, to sing your 'Song of Joy' in choir.
I enjoyed this. The rhymes were a perfect fit for the story and the message. You make it look easy, but I know it is anything but.
08/14/13
Smiled all the way through.

Thanks for cheering me up with your clever 'lil ditty!
08/15/13
Congrats! God bless~
Congratulations! Delightful as always!
08/15/13
Congratulations Kenn on this well deserved win!
08/15/13
To praise this work
I shall not shirk.
Not now, not ever;
For it is so very clever.

Well done and congrats on your placing.
Congratulations! God bless you.
KJV Hebrews 10:26-31
KJV Rev 14:12
08/19/13
Yay Kenn!