The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow - is this a true story? I loved it. It was excellent. The entire entry seemed authentic, and the dialogue realistic.

I'm so happy the end of a story makes me smile.

God bless~
Excellent story if it is fiction, simply amazing if it is true...either way it was well written and I was captivated beginning to end!
OOOOHHHHH, what a fantastic story. You grabbed my attention right out of the gate and the suspense kept my heart pounding as I read to the end. The only thing I would add (though it might be corny) would be I was Emily's angel and she was mine. Great story and one of my favorites. Rookies -- gotta love 'em!

I LOVED LOVED LOVED this story....Excellent, uplifting, and powerful.

Congratulations on your well deserved EC.

God Bless~
Congratulations Leola on your EC win! This was such a great story, so happy it placed!
Enthralling. You had my attention and I am so happy I read this.
Congratulations! God bless you.
KJV Heb 10:26-31
KJV Rev 14:12
Wowzer! I have goose bumps. Fabulous story and utterly amazing ending. My favorite!