The Official Writing Challenge
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This story was funny, and held my attention throughout. A great segue into the final and most important line. Nicely done.

God bless~
Very well written, lighthearted and humorous read—right up until the very well worded, serious and earnest ending! Just overall a well written and enjoyable read!
Excellent writing here! Kept my attention to the end. Good job!
I loved this little tirade. It's quite similar to ones I've had in the past. I held onto every word. I do have one question though. Did people really give canned beans as wedding presents 43 years ago? That was one of my favorite lines!
Congratulations for ranking 23 overall!