The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow this piece has such depth! It really touched my heart and I could totally relate.
Well written. I like the pattern established and the way each verse ends with "Forever" Thought proviking. Good job!
08/10/13
Amazing! God bless~
08/15/13
Very impressive poem, so powerful in its simplicity! Its ending words: “And step forward, toward what is right, forever” explodes with meaning, vision and message! Masterfully done! Thoroughly enjoyed the read!
Congratulations for ranking 26 overall!