The Official Writing Challenge
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Though not familiar with the song about which you wrote, you have aroused my curiosity to look it up on the internet. I like how your story flowed and how effortlessly you clued the reader in on what a moment in Peter's life might have looked like. Enjoyed it.
This is lovely. I'm not familiar with the song, but you painted a splendid picture for me. I did wonder if it was meant for the example topic, but got submitted just a Tad late. Either way, your words will make people stop and think.
Great writing, and a wonderful story to tell. I really enjoyed this. Thanks.

God bless~
This was a beautiful read…past life, work and ambitions—expired & retired, to move on to a sea that he saw even more beauty in! I loved the imagery of this and the longing it stirred in my own soul to glimpse the shores beyond the abandoned little boat. I like how you took us not only into the song, but into the MC’s mind journey. Excellent job!