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WOW, you sure brought vision to the old saying: “You May be the only Bible some people will ever see.” And what pitiful versions many of the Christians in your story showed! Says a lot when an old drunk shows more compassion than the Christians! Powerful story, vivid examples, well done!
Very powerful, varying examples. Will remember this for a while. Thanks for sharing!
This was an excellent story that showed both sides of Christianity, hypocrisy and compassion, with a heart of Christ.

This reminded me of a modern day version of the "The good Samaritan Story" where the least expected provided help.

The heart is not a respector of persons, when it is a heart reflective of Christ.

Great job...I loved it.

God bless~

Vivid, absorbing pictures fill this piece: of the physical setting and of your various characters' attitudes and responses. Well done.
What a beautiful, modern version of the Good Samaritan. You did an awesome job and brought tears to my eyes. I've missed your stories. Congratulations for placing 10 in your level and 11 overall! (Highest rankings can found on the message boards) Happy Dance!!!