The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 263 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
08/02/13
This is a very creative and interesting take on the topic and you've done it well. It reminds me a bit of the novel 'Fahrenheit 451' by Ray Bradbury, which, ironically, was itself banned at first. Great work!
08/04/13
Interesting, thought provoking look into a could-be future. In a world today, where too many are allowing God given freedoms to be trampled on, this story is not so far-fetched! Cerina was indeed a good example of how we all need to stop being complacent and fight against policies that steal our freedoms! Well done! Enjoyed!
08/05/13
Interesting piece of work and not so unbelievable in light of what's happening in our world today.

Excellent writing. Thanks.

God bless~
Congratulations for ranking 22 overall!