The Official Writing Challenge
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08/01/13
Touching story. I love the way Sherry took away the best part of the experience and left the rest.
08/03/13
I like how you used the examples of the scrambled eggs to highlight the other, more important, opposing examples:
A teacher, that would not only allow favoritism bullying, but would participate in it so strongly herself! What a poor example of a teacher she was!
And Sherry, who was able to internalize the good from the situation, and not let the bad demoralize her! What a good example of inner strength Sherry showed!
Great job giving visualization to the topic in this well written story!
08/05/13
Clever, entertaining, fun, different and descriptive.

I really liked this so much, so unique and fresh.

God bless~