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So touching. You've captured a very genuine quality in this scene.
11/15/05
Simple and sweet.
A delight!
11/16/05
This was very touching. It did seem like the tense changed a few places but otherwise very nice:)
Tender and sweet, and HOPEFUL. :-)
11/19/05
Very touching. Told with compassion.