The Official Writing Challenge
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This is an interesting story. You do a nice job of building the character and defining the conflict. Nice job.
07/31/13
This story was an enjoyable read with well done visuals and interaction of characters, then satisfyingly tied up with a hint of romance and spiritual growth ahead for Abby. Amazing when we expand our horizons what God could have waiting there for us!
Congratulations on placing 7 in your level and 11 overall!