The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed this. You did a great job of developing the conflict. I wanted to read more. Would she resolve her problem? Of course, because she learned to put it in God's hands and just take one step at a time. This is a great message and reminder. I liked how you brought the ending full circle. Nice job.
I loved the way you developed the message with some mystery and repeated the 'just a crack' idea. A great journey starts with the first step, and the great expansion of God's kingdom with a small crack in our heart. We have such small hearts that God needs to expand. The pastor is a good example to us. Your story really worked for me. Thanks.
Your entry has an air of mystery about it which kept me reading. Your message is cleverly woven from what the pastor said and what Abigail was going through. Well written. Thanks.
Bingo. We have a winner here, I think. I very much enjoyed the way you presented this story. Excellent writing.
Congratulations on placing 6th in your level and 16 overall!