The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/13
God does speak in many different ways, unique to each of His children in turn. Isn't it an amazing thing to know that? I liked the the reflections of Issac as he recalled his life story. I felt bad for Lizzie though, because lack of outer beauty doesn't always hide the fact that there is Inner Beauty. Good job. Thanks for sharing.
I loved your introductory paragraph,especially the horse's name and the picture of contentment you drew. There was so much in this short piece,especially the story of Lizzie. I thoroughly enjoyed it from beginning to end.
07/30/13
Love how the vision, property, family, understanding, age, contentment and blessings all expand for the MC, as his long life journey progresses along in this wonderfully written short story! A very interesting and enjoyable read!