The Official Writing Challenge
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God does speak in many different ways, unique to each of His children in turn. Isn't it an amazing thing to know that? I liked the the reflections of Issac as he recalled his life story. I felt bad for Lizzie though, because lack of outer beauty doesn't always hide the fact that there is Inner Beauty. Good job. Thanks for sharing.
I loved your introductory paragraph,especially the horse's name and the picture of contentment you drew. There was so much in this short piece,especially the story of Lizzie. I thoroughly enjoyed it from beginning to end.
Love how the vision, property, family, understanding, age, contentment and blessings all expand for the MC, as his long life journey progresses along in this wonderfully written short story! A very interesting and enjoyable read!