The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/13
Hahahahahahaha! I loved this endearing and well written entry.The judges will take notice of this quality story that held an "old fashioned charm" that is rarely found in the world today.

I could see it all happening in front of me. The cute younger MC waiting patiently while watching her mother. The anticipation, the excitement, the secret between mother and child.

This was a true delight to read, and it expanded my heart with joy. Thanks!

God bless~
07/27/13
Great imagery here, laced with credibility and fun. It reawakened the repressed memory of some rhubarb wine we made 30 years ago, when it exploded in our cellar during a church family picnic. Not a good look for a pastor and his family, so thanks a lot! :-(
07/27/13
Gotta love a story with an explosive ending! Lighthearted, fun read. Well done!
07/27/13
Great story, made me smile. Great take on the topic as well. Very well done, my dear!
I see this one as a winner!
07/30/13
Loved your cute dialogue between mom and daughter. Your true story was 'truly' entertaining!
Congratulations for ranking 8th in your level and 18th overall!! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards)Happy Dance!!