The Official Writing Challenge
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A very good running internal commentary about life and what people think is important. I really enjoyed this witty piece. Thanks for sharing.

God bless~
Love the undulations in your self-talk, with spiritual aspirations and verdicts being shoved aside by moments of personal candour and of God's gentle rebukes along the way. Very enjoyable read.
I'm ashamed to admit how much I can relate to her struggle. You did a wonderful job finding the right tempo for her angst. I really enjoyed it!
Congratulations on ranking 32 overall!!