The Official Writing Challenge
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11/14/05
The fast-paced dialogue kept my interest throughout. The conclusion is truly touching and the title is fantastic. This is a great piece of writing!
I agree! This dialogue is so well written! Very real!
11/15/05
This is wonderful. Well written, but it seems like the start of something more.
I was just getting into it.
Beautiful characters.
Writing style: awesome!
11/15/05
Many readers will relate to this one. Good job.
This is a pleasing, delightful, very good, beautiful piece of writing about a terrible... oh you get the message - Deni
11/16/05
Whew..I'm tired for her! great pace and great reminder of how we need to be out there. I thought the people were so realistic! Very good!!
11/16/05
True to life and so well told. And that's one of my favorite verses. Great job.
11/16/05
Great job! The fast pace was just enough to get us really involved without driving us nuts.
11/16/05
Congrats on such a great entry Debbie. This was my favorite sentence I stop abusing myself
Nicely done - you brought the reader "inside" your character! I bet most of us have found ourselves in a similar spot.
I liked this! It was fun to read and hit home so hard! Thanks
11/18/05
Unfortunately, I've had a few of those days myself! Great story:)
Very realistic the way the emotions of the characters are expressed.
11/20/05
Such a realistic portrayal of a working day, interaction of characters and your characters thoughts! A fast paced story that packs a punch at several levels. Yeggy