The Official Writing Challenge
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07/21/13
You set the scene here so well I felt like I was right in the car with them! Love the dialogue and the message that God's timing is always in our best interest is a lesson we ought to remember more often. Great piece.
07/21/13
I loved your MC and the very first sentences of description. Well written, and with a great message.
07/21/13
Timing is everything or so God tells me. Lovely story I enjoyed so very much! Thanks for sharing your talent.

Blessings, Lynn
07/22/13
You painted a full color picture right from the get go. Wonderfully entertaining yet with a 'timeless' message. Loved it!
07/22/13
I loved these two characters. You had an awesome introduction, for sure too. :)
07/23/13
A pleasant read about God's will and timing being quite different to ours. Thanks!
07/23/13
What a delightful story! Loved it from the beginning. Good job! God bless!
07/24/13
This was a joy to read. Ahhh...God and His timing, always perfect, never quite to our understanding.

I loved it! Thanks.

God bless~
07/25/13
Congratulations on your well deserved fine placement! A really great one. Blessings.
Congratulations on placing for a excellent story with an excellent message.
07/25/13
Congrats! God bless~
07/25/13
What an interesting story. I enjoyed it from beginning to end. A well deserved 2nd place EC.
07/25/13
Ah, Virgil! So glad this entry placed! Congratulations! God bless!
07/25/13
No wonder this did so well. Your descriptions and character development were perfect. I felt like I was in the car with them. Great message too. Congratulations!
07/25/13
Yay so happy for you!
07/25/13
Great characterisation and dialogue packed around some well-grounded wisdom. Congratulations on your well-deserved second placing.
07/26/13
Congratulations! I loved your characters and the interesting descriptions beginning in the first paragraph. Excellent job!
I enjoyed this so much! Congratulations! . . .

Praise YHWH. Hebrews 10:26-31, Revelation 12:17
06/23/14
Congratulations on having your well-written story show-cased this week. Great characterization, strong MC voice and great imagery. I found myself rooting for this young man.