The Official Writing Challenge
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07/18/13
Wow! Heart wrenching. Well written. God bless!
07/19/13
This is beautifully written. I really like the mystery of who is talking in the first half. Great story!
This is one powerful piece! Grabs the heart right from the beginning, and never lets go.
07/22/13
Powerful imagery as you skilfully set the scene - without fully revealing what the scene actually was until half-way through, when you'd completely hooked me.
Great work.
07/24/13
Phnomenal bit of writing. Pulled me in immediately and even though I guessed where it was going, it still managed to jar me in a powerful and uplifting way.

Fantastic job. Thanks.

God bless~
07/25/13
"Conceived in sin and born into grace"-a stunning conclusion to your powerful piece. Well done!
Gripping! Beautifully written. Thank you.

Congratulations!
Hugs, Judi

Praise YHWH. Hebrews 10:26-31, Revelation 12:17