The Official Writing Challenge
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This was an interesting story. You had me going. I thought the MC might be an animal at first. My biggest red ink, is the person on a ventilator wouldn't be able to talk because they'd have a tube jammed down their throat and just a couple of days is too soon to be trached, but then that's why someone invented the term literary license. :) You did a nice job of covering the topic. I also really enjoyed your words that are foreign to my ear, but such wonderful words! One of my favorites-Nurse Choppy Chops! You also packed in a great message with this delightful story.
It definitely kept my attention and stirred my curiosity like a mystery. I enjoyed this story. Thanks for sharing.