The Official Writing Challenge
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06/17/13
I enjoyed this. What a lovely idea and good take on the topic. Hopefully, some beauticians will read and try this! Well written and interesting. I love your descriptions.
06/19/13
Very well told, creative story. I'd much rather listen to hummed hymns than to gossip. Thank you.
06/19/13
Lovely example of how the Lord can work through us in our daily work.A hummer is a happy person and she spread His joy all around!
06/20/13
I just need to say, sweet Sawa, that your last line is PERFECT. Absolutely nothing could end this wonderful story better. And I love the whole idea. And this is SO deserving of an EC. Glad you got one. :D
06/20/13
She knew her customers. I love the way you set up the story and introduced each character. Super work, Sawa! And mega congrats on your level award and Editor's Choice!!
06/20/13
An excellent and beautifully told story. Dyshona's life (and hums) speak volumes - a great inspiration. Thankyou for this lovely tale.
06/20/13
Nice characterization!
Congratulations on your EC!
06/20/13
I thoroughly enjoyed your unique and captivating look into the routines of a salon. Great job at drawing this reader into your web!
06/20/13
This was fun, entertaining and your last staff character really made me smile. Congratulations on making the EC list with this creative entry.
06/21/13
SAWAH!!! *Tackles Sarah with a hug* Great job on this one. I think I'd want her too. :)