The Official Writing Challenge
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06/17/13
This is very descriptive, with a stark look at earth and an upward look to heaven. It caused me to think about how important it is to embrace the truth and to pass it on. Good rhythm and meaningful.
06/19/13
Very well done. I like this. Thank you.
06/20/13
What great depths you have covered in this lovely poem. You describe well the groanings of creation, the cries of the human heart, reaching out with the Gospel. Very telling lines - 'to understand what the choice is
Be trapped by friendly wolves or set free by truth-filled voices'
I love verse 4 particularly and the beautiful descriptions of Heaven. Thankyou for this.
Congratulations on ranking 10th in level 4 and 12 overall!
06/20/13
What a glorious progression. I loved the ending. Wow! You've some wonderful images here and a great title that captures attention. Great work, Charla!