The Official Writing Challenge
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06/16/13
Well done with the telling of this biblical story. I didn't realise that it was about Nathan and David for quite a while. You told it with drama and suspense. I enjoyed it.
06/17/13
Very "real" in the characters and the thoughts of Nate. It made them come alive, and made the original point well. The story always reminds me of the weaknesses of the human heart, even the man after God's own heart. Great writing.
06/19/13
Clever and creative retelling of this Bible story...you made it sound very contemporary and surprised us at the end when David was confronted. Great work!