The Official Writing Challenge
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06/14/13
This sounds like the heart and mind of a true writer, obsessed with those characters, and wondering what to do with them. Well written and thought provoking.
I am sure you delete them kindly and painlessly. Sometimes the extras get in the way of telling a story in the most 'telling' fashion - it is not always a case of the more the merrier. Good story. God bless you.
06/16/13
I really enjoyed reading this. I didn't guess who the 'pesky people' were at all until you revealed it. I was waiting to find out. Of course - the characters in your mind. Most entertaining!