The Official Writing Challenge
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06/13/13
Good, natural dialogue with genuine warmth and wit flowing throughout. throwing in a bit of teaching helped the cause as well. And I did enjoy Greg's hum-ble apology.
We can all relate to writer's block, but you may not have heard that I once wrote a book about it. The easiest thing I've ever done because every page was blank ;-)
06/14/13
Very enjoyable story. I was humming right along with your characters by the end.
06/14/13
Loved this. Its a favorite scripture song, and one worth humming! Good writing.
06/14/13
I like the way you've written this, centred around two people and two rooms. I can visualise Amy in the details. I know someone just like her. And you brought Greg's character to life with his irritability and the cake crumbs. Nice one!
Congratulations in ranking 26 overall!
06/20/13
I can relate to Amy, I've had songs and verses going around in my head at times too. I completely enjoyed your creatively-written story.