The Official Writing Challenge
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Powerful ending with emotional intrique combined.

God bless~
Yes, I agree really powerful ending. This story drove home it's point.
Powerful indeed. Your footnote educated me. I had no idea about the extent of the situation in Holland. I worked with the terminally ill for some years and can appreciate where both members of staff were coming from. Congratulations on your win.
Congrats on your editor's choice placement. Your entry is so well written. I jumped in from the first word and barely came up for a breath until it ended. Great!