The Official Writing Challenge
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06/06/13
Excellent use of dialogue to develop plot and somewhat of character, especially delightful interplay with little girls at end. Seemed to take a while to get into main focus and I was a little confused as to direction. Perhaps begin with conversation between Julia and Mom which just seems like a clearer beginner. I really liked the bear as the bearer of the thump.
06/10/13
Cute and clever! Enjoyed this one.
06/12/13
I enjoyed your sweet tooth fairy story. Well done!
06/13/13
Sharp, crisp, fresh, creative, and clever. In other words, I loved it.

God Bless~
Congratulations on ranking 17 overall.