The Official Writing Challenge
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Captivating . . .
06/08/13
Wow, this one had me holding my breath as I read it. What a fresh and inspiring take on the topic. Excellent, my friend.

Blessings, Lynn
06/13/13
The analogy of juggling balls is a good one! Outside the box.
For me the content and analogy was good enough to keep me hooked and I found the fast pace maybe was a little to jumpy and fast. But that may just be me.
Keep up the good substance.
06/13/13
Superb! What an imaginative and fascinating read.

Excellent job.

God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 24 overall. Happy Dance!!