The Official Writing Challenge
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06/09/13
Aww...I enjoyed this so much. What a lovely relationship between father and daughter. Authentic storyline with realistic dialogue...nicely done.

Cute ending interlaced with a good message.

God bless~
06/11/13
Ahhhh... so touching! I was afraid it was going to have a super sad ending, but it didn't.
06/13/13
Congratulations on ranking 6 in your level and 19 overall!! HAPPY DANCE!!