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Good descriptive did a great job of describing what the MC had witnessed.

God Bless~
When I posted this, I forgot to add a scripture at the end.

Matthew 24:36
"No one knows about that day or hour, not even the angels in heaven, nor the Son, but only the Father. (NIV)

Matthew 24:40-41
Two men will be in the field; one will be taken and the other left. Two women will be grinding with a hand mill; one will be taken and the other left. (NIV)

Bravo my dear. This is another excellent piece of work. I love the suspense. Your vivid descriptions brought everything to usual. Great job on this one.
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