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A beautiful article straight from your heart to ours. Your sister, like you, was truly a beautiful woman.
I loved your thoughts here, maybe because I understand personally (although not as much as your sister) the influence of cancer. The insights in this story are deep and full of impact. One suggestion: paragraph spacing would make it much easier to read. I ended wishing I could share a cup of coffee with you and your sister and talk some more! I feel I would grow in your presence. :-)
11/19/05
Beautiful thoughts. Break your paragraphs with a space for ease of reading. Thanks for posting.