The Official Writing Challenge
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05/30/13
Beautiful touching and well played out entry! This really blessed my heart and made my eyes sting with tears of joy! realistic dialogue, I was so caught up in it, and I felt as if I was watching a movie in my mind's eye.

I loved it. This will do well with the judges...and if not, it did me!

God bless~
Oh how I enjoyed this story. I had a dog almost kill me when I was almost five so literally, sweat started beading up on my face as I read your story. The characters were so well developed. The dialog just flowed and felt so natural. You did a grand job on this piece.
06/02/13
This is a great and heartwarming story. I loved it. Well done!
06/06/13
I felt like I was a hidden visitor peeking in on this scene. You did a fantastic job with the characters. Well put together with a blessing of an ending.
06/06/13
Congrats! God bless~
Congratulations for ranking 5th in your level and 18 overall! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards)