The Official Writing Challenge
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05/30/13
Good job with the retelling of this well-known biblical story.

God bless~
Wow you really brought this story to life. I totally enjoyed it and could envision the scene unfolding like you suggested. Good job.
06/02/13
An excellent example of "how its done". Great imagery, showing the tale unfolding. Though the story is well known, you told in a fresh way. Very enjoyable read. Good work.
06/02/13
This is so well done and interesting, as well as a great illustration of whining! I enjoyed it all, and love your title.
06/06/13
The King sucking his thumb. Ha! What a vivid portrayal you gave of King Ahab and his wife Jezebel. Your presentation dealt with the topic of whining in a most descriptive way and gave us warning for how far that bad habit can take us. Great message, excellent writing.
06/06/13
Congrats! God Bless~
06/06/13
Congrats! God bless~
06/06/13
Congratulations on your win.