The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a powerful poem. You really touched my heart with your words and reminded me to be thankful for the many blessings that I have.
05/31/13
Hauntingly beautiful and overwhelmingly powerful!

God bless~
05/31/13
Profound and well written. It brings out a sad truth, and should remind us to guard against becoming callous and uncaring.
The last two lines sum up all the ideas in the poem very well.
Your rhymnes and rhythm seem almost effortless. This is a real work of art for mind and heart.
06/05/13
A beautiful poem that flows well and has an important message. I loved the last line too. Great job.
Congratulations on ranking 11th overall!