The Official Writing Challenge
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You did a delightful job of pulling the emotions out on this one. I could feel the MC's pain as I imagined losing a place I called home for fifty years to "progress." This is a thought-provoking piece for sure. Good job.
05/31/13
Wow - this touched my heart. You did an amazing job with this introspective and reflective piece. Thank you. God bless~
05/31/13
Very good writing, from the first to the last word. I was there with your MC, hearing the sounds and feeling the memories swell. Thanks for this.
Good work delivering an emotional story.
06/06/13
Leola, Congrats on a beautiful story and well-deserved EC!

God bless~
06/06/13
Vivid word pictures drew me in through an extremely well-crafted and very accurate portrayal of pain and loss.
Congratulations on a well-deserved HC.