The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed how you brought this familiar Bible story to life. I could easily picture it all as it unfolded. I also enjoyed the introduction of several new vocabulary words. You definitely covered the topic in a fun and fresh way.
05/31/13
Great job of the well-known Biblical story...you did a great job of bringing it to life in a creative fashion.

God bless~
06/01/13
At first I didnt think you could pull this off, and would not satisfy the criteria of the key word. Not only did you succeed, you brought us there. Nice work!
Outstanding story telling based on an outstanding story!
06/06/13
Congrats! God bless~
06/06/13
Creative window on a very well-known story, with clearly-evident research that earths it so well. Your MC gives us a personal "in-cider's" view of this miracle. Well done.