The Official Writing Challenge
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05/30/13
I really enjoyed how you brought this familiar Bible story to life. I could easily picture it all as it unfolded. I also enjoyed the introduction of several new vocabulary words. You definitely covered the topic in a fun and fresh way.
05/31/13
Great job of the well-known Biblical story...you did a great job of bringing it to life in a creative fashion.

God bless~
06/01/13
At first I didnt think you could pull this off, and would not satisfy the criteria of the key word. Not only did you succeed, you brought us there. Nice work!
06/01/13
Outstanding story telling based on an outstanding story!
06/06/13
Congrats! God bless~
06/06/13
Creative window on a very well-known story, with clearly-evident research that earths it so well. Your MC gives us a personal "in-cider's" view of this miracle. Well done.