The Official Writing Challenge
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This is an interesting juxtaposition. You did a fantastic job of developing the characters and making it seem so realistic. I did notice you had a few incomplete sentences here and there that slightly threw me off for just a second. I did enjoy the story, nonetheless, and think it is a wonderful reminder of how blessed we truly are. Nicely done.
05/31/13
Beautiful commentary/story about our amazing Country and how God's blessings have graced us all.

God bless~
05/31/13
This is a really good reminder of how fortunate we are, and how we sometimes take it for granted. You did well in making us think twice before complaining. Good writing.
This was an excellent example for "showing" the topic--without ever using the word. Great job!
Wonderful in so many ways.Thank you for writing this.
06/06/13
Congrats! God Bless~