The Official Writing Challenge
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05/30/13
This is an interesting juxtaposition. You did a fantastic job of developing the characters and making it seem so realistic. I did notice you had a few incomplete sentences here and there that slightly threw me off for just a second. I did enjoy the story, nonetheless, and think it is a wonderful reminder of how blessed we truly are. Nicely done.
05/31/13
Beautiful commentary/story about our amazing Country and how God's blessings have graced us all.

God bless~
05/31/13
This is a really good reminder of how fortunate we are, and how we sometimes take it for granted. You did well in making us think twice before complaining. Good writing.
06/01/13
This was an excellent example for "showing" the topic--without ever using the word. Great job!
06/04/13
Wonderful in so many ways.Thank you for writing this.
06/06/13
Congrats! God Bless~