The Official Writing Challenge
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05/23/13
I liked the way you teased your reader into thinking the MC's were married. You showed how conniving the devil can be and how patiently Jesus waits for us to respond to his knocking on our hearts. This quick paced entry was fun to read.
05/24/13
What a clever and fun approach to the topic, and beautifully written.

Loved it! God bless~
05/31/13
I'm trying to figure out why the devil took of his clothes-hehe.