The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/13
You've kept the interest running through dialogue that appears mundane, but it builds to a strong punch. Well done.
05/24/13
Loved the natural dialogue, I felt as if I was sitting listening to an everyday convo! Excellent job with this realistic story that concluded in a stong fashion.

God bless~
05/28/13
Gripping dialogue. Well developed.
Congratulations for ranking 18 overall!